Wednesday, August 7, 2013

Persuasive Writing

Reggie Park
804 KMLA Dormitory

8/5/2013

Dear students,

I am writing this letter because I believe young pupils should participate in GLPS if they get  
a chance.

Many experts like Mr. Morgan, for example agree with me. I will explain reasons for this and give facts to support my opinion.

The first reason is because going to GLPS would be beneficial for students. According to Mr. Morgan, who has been a teacher at GLPS for nine years, said that GLPS would can be very helpful to the students. He also added that he love watching students do debate and prefer eating in the cafeteria than cooking that he enjoy GLPS a lot as well.

The second reason is because one can learn many subjects in GLPS. There are facts to show this is true. If you look at the site of GLPS (Click here to go to the site), it can be proven that one can enjoy great activities in GLPS.

The final reason is because one can experience living in a dormitory. There is a picture to  
show this is true. (Click here to see where I've gotten the picture) It can be seen that one can have a unique experience of living in a dormitory.
As you can see, this is why I think students should come to GLPS.

Based on my arguments, I hope you will consider my point of view that young pupils should consider coming to GLPS if they get a chance.

Sincerely,
Reggie

2 comments:

  1. I indeed agree with you Reggie^^

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  2. I agree that GLPS is great for students. This letter is too short though, try adding more facts and information to it as well as choosing more evidence to support your opinion.

    Keep up the good work!

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